The First element commented on was the greyscale, some thinking that it would be better if it were staggered better rather than it being constant. While i can understand their point, i used the greyscale all the way through to try and illustrate the depth the main character is going into to best tell his story. This has allowed me to see how some elements that i thought would benefit the story and cinematography aren't received in the same way by consumers. This suggests that a better approach is having consumers involved all the way through in order to make sure that some elements are visible in terms of their reason for being.
Secondly, my sample seemed to like the element of recount held throughout. My brother suggested that the first transition into the bedroom scenes, marked by a fade, links it to being more dream- like, which was the mood i was trying for.
other observations made by my sample were;
- good examples of camera placement and shots
- nice use of establishing shots
- maybe needing a greater diversity of items and shots
However, keeping the sample size small with an unstructured interview allowed me to get a greater, more in depth view from people rather than just receiving a numerical outcome.
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